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:icontsukeo:
Sooo, this is Alice, a redraw for :iconthedarkessance:'s competition~
Incase you were wondering, the original is

yeahh, the original is just...
;N;
SOO!
improvement check timeee~
the original was submitted on the 28th of July this year...
have I improved much?
I think I'm getting the lineart and shading a little better now ;U;
mabye...
DX
Idon'tevenknowanymoreee
(C) Art to me
(C) Alice to :iconthedarkessance:
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Critique by *ViChaN91312 Nov 4, 2012, 8:29:28 AM
if i can critique this picture :)

for the hair color, it's sure improve much. but overall i must say i like it the previous one. this time it's a bit stiff and her feet look like fat (sorry) try to make her feet a little small or long. if it's help you, try to draw the sketch (you know, the line of body with thin line then put the clothes on)

i can say her face and hair is good, but the body isn't. the line you use is a bit too thick.

sorry if i say something wrong. you can just listen this or ignore this. thanks
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~TheDarkEssance Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
    You have much improved my awesome sauce ;u; ~♥
    I've read the critique and i do agree with Vi-Chans points but over all i love your new style ;D
    if i decide to choose you as a winner you may re-draw this as many times as you like lol
    i would write a critique but i suck at things like that ;-;
    but i do love you new style ;D and i cant wait until your next peice of art work ;D
    do you think you will be drawing alex? *3*
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=Tsukeo Nov 6, 2012
I haveeeee?!?!
:iconwhutplz:
WOO!
I love my new style too~
It's really comfortable (that sounds wierd... owo) to draw that way now <33
yaaaay~! redraws are fun C:<
<-- sucks horribly at those things too :')
>//< my next artwork will probably be her faceset, and then, I'll probably do Alex If I get the time to do it~
c:
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~TheDarkEssance Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
    Are you gunna do a 95x95 face set again or the other type? ;3
    and i know what you mean by the comfyness of it ;v; ive still yet to find my comfy style
    but yea i really do think youve improved alot *0* *and i thought you were brilliant to begin with* :iconpervysebastianplz:

    if you do get a chance to draw alex i cant wait ;D ~♥
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=Tsukeo Dec 2, 2012
*has already done it*
:iconpokerface3plz:
>>
I gotta do Alex's faceset next, right?
o3o
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~ZoombiiPanda Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
    Omg I just

    I love you give me this drawing
    :iconcannotevenplz:


    You've improved so much omg<3
    Like *ViChaN91312 said, the feet look a little bit off
    But other than that omg I love it<3333

    Please mommy omg gimme your style.
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=Tsukeo Nov 6, 2012
:iconamgtouchplz:
y-you
wow
I just...
sjkfhskjdkjfxkjgfb
^had a spaz attack just then >>
.O.
*hands over the drawing*
there you gooo~
really? ;O; I can die happy now...
*dies*
...
...
*rises from the dead to finish the conversation XDD*
yus, I shall attempt to improve on that next >>

...
I shall give you my style if you give me your chibi styleee!
<-- can't draw chibis that well ;O;
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~ZoombiiPanda Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
    THANK YOU FOR THE AMAZING DRAWING ;W; <33

    NO
    STOP
    HAVING
    A SPAZ ATTACK
    AND THEN DYING.


    Gahh feet are pretty hard, I hate drawing them >n<

    Nonononoochjifodhfge your chibis are awesome give me them in exchange for nothing
    my chibis are not better ;N;
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*replicator13 Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
who could ever criticize such a cute drawing? :3
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=Tsukeo Nov 4, 2012
;O; youamazingpersonnn
thank youu~!
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*replicator13 Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
aww yr welcome :hug:
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